Cutes Skirt
Teen Girls
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Easy laundering
You can buy cutes skirts in many different colors and sizes. We can find one that will match you. If you don't like cutes skirts, well just take a look at one, and you'll love them! Buy one now and get 50% off!
5 comments:
Good job, Maria. But if you wrote your 4-sentence paragraph a bit more actively, with more adjectives, I think it would've been better.
i agree with Hyun Jin. A little bit more detail and its good to go!
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It was pretty good over all. Maybe use just a bit more actively and with more adjectives. But I agree with Hyun Jin.
Good job Maria!:-) :>
You did write four sentences, but you should add more adjectives. Everything else is very good. :> :)
Nice Job! Cute skirts! Cool!
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